Status Updates From Love Songs for the Road
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Kanoko
is 23% done
Ryan's characterisation is all over the place. Marcus is perfect, blah blah. Their attraction seems forced, which of course makes everything romance-related contrived.
One page away from being dropped, the story has found another leg (y'know, aside from the custody thing) to stand on: Marcus is famous, and apparently Ryan doesn't like social media (I'm with you, girl).
Should I continue to struggle, I wonder.
— Feb 10, 2014 03:08AM
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One page away from being dropped, the story has found another leg (y'know, aside from the custody thing) to stand on: Marcus is famous, and apparently Ryan doesn't like social media (I'm with you, girl).
Should I continue to struggle, I wonder.
Kanoko
is 15% done
Hero says something suggestive.
“She was definitely awake now.”
A few sentences later:
“…still sleepy and disoriented…”
Just so heroine could stumble and let the hero hold her…?
IDK, but I'm seriously not caring for the narrative in this one.
— Feb 08, 2014 02:05PM
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“She was definitely awake now.”
A few sentences later:
“…still sleepy and disoriented…”
Just so heroine could stumble and let the hero hold her…?
IDK, but I'm seriously not caring for the narrative in this one.
Kanoko
is 7% done
Some issue with the flow. I'm having a hard time getting into the story and the characters. Ryan seems like my kind of heroine; it's just that there's something about the writing that's throwing my connection with her off…
— Feb 08, 2014 04:08AM
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Kim Person
is 2% done
Oh that just painted one hell of a picture ~ I would've busted out laughing!!!!
— Dec 29, 2013 08:58AM
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