Status Updates From State of Paradise

One hundred and forty words in, and a plot has emerged!

A truly meandering story. Where nearly every paragraph is its own consolidate vignette. While the writing is enjoyable to follow along with, it’s hard to say that this is a story with a plot. More an internal monologue constantly shifting as a story happens outside of the pages.

Absolutely love the meandering first act that works well at establishing a post-pandemic Florida riddles with threatening, if not yet truly dangerous, events on the horizon.