Status Updates From Who Comes with Cannons?

Nov 17 Even worse reading the second half, for all of the same reasons. But it got outlandish and too fantastical to believe. The ending was too unfinished for me and I didn't like how things left off.

Nov 16 I'm not enjoying this and just want to be done. It's not interesting at all; the storytelling is so boring; the dialogue is driving me crazy and the writing is really simple. Not what I expected.