Status Updates From Bloodfeather Lullaby (Blood...

This is a weird premise but sure ok

I’m enjoying the story so far but the writing itself is a little hard to digest. It doesn’t feel smooth, it’s more choppy and amateurish. Almost as if the author was constantly looking up words in the thesaurus to make it sound better but it resulted in it sounding too formal. But I’m enjoying it overall!

slow start but it's really interesting now