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is 99% done
-missed opportunities to do 4v1 team-up or literally ANY deduction considering Annabelle is not only leader but also is “smart” and they mentioned it TWICE
-no character development
2*, too many missed opportunities that I think a good editor and honest feedback would’ve helped address, straight plot with no nuance nor development with a few twists that are either obvious or anticlimactic, not for adult readers
— May 20, 2026 08:21AM
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-no character development
2*, too many missed opportunities that I think a good editor and honest feedback would’ve helped address, straight plot with no nuance nor development with a few twists that are either obvious or anticlimactic, not for adult readers
