Status Updates From Unleashed

Them having this heartfelt convo while Josephine is just… watching lol

All right Fenris get over yourself, you’re the one who hasn’t been picking up your calls.

But also dude don’t keep kissing a girl that s clearly having a panic attack

… gaaaah why do romances always have a dramatic and weird breakup

Wonder Woman is in this book now

A lot of children were murdered in a very short time

THERE ARE CHILDREN DYING AND YOU TAKE TIME TO KISS?
WHAT THE HECKING CHEESECAKE

“Was he LEANING?”
????!!!

“Carnations don’t say SEX. Do you know how hard it is to get the mother of a one year old in the mood?”
TMI, MARCEL. TMI

Sara is no longer The Special, people.

Two drinking people walked into a bedroom… hooooo boi

Why does he own a baby grand piano, that’s so… weird
Also *presses pause* Kay so I know he has a temper but we’re getting beaten over the head with it. Like yes. We know. And I know like… characters with tempers can be an issue to write. But Fen doesn’t strike me as impulsive. But he has this impulsive temper that just is so… disorienting. It’s like his personality was Frankensteined together…

*in Grandma Gabby Voice* DEREK! HOW DARE YOU DIE AND TRAUMATIZE ALL THE CHARACTERS!
but also why do the nerdy kids in the book die first…

“BECAUSE YOU’RE MY EMOTIONAL SUPPORT FRIEND!”
*stares*
*stares at Fenris*
*stares at Fenris more*
Oh brother…

“I’ve read Austen.”
Yes of course you would, Fenris. It’s an excellent chick magnet.

“Why are you so moody today”
Sara did you only just notice? He’s as bad as a teenage girl

Both Fen and Marcel gawking over Sara’s motorcycle… and Marcel gawking over her… Marcel you’re married *Gibbs slaps him*

Fen needs to chill about the coffee. Good grief.

Marcel is gonna die, calling it now

You should not read this book after watching NCIS, because you’ll WANT the dialogue to be the same as NCIS and it’s… not *sigh* my only complaint rn is that the dialogue is… offf and idk what exactly is off but it’s like… where are these people from idk they have unset character voices

Fen has as many mood swings as a PMSing woman…

Fen is a littttleee too aggressive for my tastes… hrmph

“There are concerns over the children.”
NOT THE CHILDREN

Bro banter makes every book better. I approve.

Third person omniscient… well this will take some getting used to …

Welp reading this after watching NCIS is weird but we’ll figure it out…

A little choppy, a little rushed in the characterization, and needs more world-building, but I am enjoying this story! It’s definitely got me drawn in.

Good story so far, but there have been several typos along the way.