Status Updates From Immortal Longings (Flesh & ...

“Don’t you know?” She peers at the kid again. “If you mind other people’s business too much a god will rush into your nose and take your body.”
CALLA IM FUCKING CRYINGGG

it’s giving the hunger games and i’m not complaining

Great read so far, the writing can feel slightly repetitious occasionally, as if every time a main character returns to the pages a few paragraphs need to reintroduce or reinforce their past or motives while another paragraph or so comments on the dystopian environment.

Besides that very minor nitpick, great read so far!