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Jen
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Wow. That was incredibly short and kinda meh. Review to come. 8/19/24
— Aug 19, 2024 05:10PM
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Jen
is on page 84 of 160
How does getting stabbed in the shoulder kill them?!? There was NO mention of poison on the blades. This is just STUPID.
— Aug 19, 2024 05:03PM
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Jen
is on page 42 of 160
So far this makes very little sense. The action scenes are drawn in a way that my brain is unable to understand and the world building seems to expect the reader to make most of the leaps themselves. I don’t mind filling in a few blanks here and there, but the author really should be doing the heavy lifting.
— Aug 19, 2024 04:59PM
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