Status Updates From The Hurricane Wars

rereading since I GOT THE ARC FOR BOOK 3😭

So ur telling me ur gonna just casually forgive the man that ruined your life, got your family and your bestfriend killed, just because he called you beautiful??? If they liked eachother I would forgive it but man oh man this is so stupid

So on one page its raining- but its not rain its actually her crying because she doesnt know why but she has a memory (isnt described) and then one very long paragraph of description that isn't properly seperated later (info dump is crazy I genuinly cant comprehend how a literate person edited this book and was like 🔥🔥) IT STOPS RAINING? but it wasn't raining in the first place 😭