Status Updates From The Gathering

This scene should be horrifying and heartwrenching, but the writing is so fucking bad.

This is some of the worst telling instead of showing I’ve read all year.

“Red spots of color”. I’m annoyed. Like yeah, I get what that line is doing, but come on. Editor! Where were you? With all that said, I am enjoying all the stuff about the animals.

There’s a good book trying to break out of here.

I can’t call this book bad. I just wish it was better.