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Bailey Cowen
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Reading this arc to review for Netgalley
— Mar 22, 2024 10:37AM
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Mike
is 5% done
A lack of contractions leads to stiff dialog, and a frequent absence of the past perfect tense makes for temporal whiplash. Not sure I'll stick with it; that will be down to whether the characters and/or their story question are compelling enough.
— Mar 06, 2024 02:29PM
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