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Mahnoor Khan
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I realize what I don’t like about the writing — there is 5x as much prose surrounding dialogue and everything always reads deeper than it needs to be. Lore is always overanalyzing her own thoughts and feelings, but it is never acknowledged. It’s not a strength or show of good characterization, I just think it’s poor writing that over-indexes on descriptions and the “show” in show-don’t-tell.
— Oct 26, 2026 02:59PM
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Mahnoor Khan
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I’ve been in denial of the writing since the first book, but it’s truly not great. The pacing feels like I’m watching things unfold in slow-mo. I really do not want to DNF
— Oct 25, 2026 01:40PM
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