Status Updates from All Editions of Dark Winter: The Wicca Circle (Dark Winter, #1)

Meredith is on page 34 of 456

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Tammie Tackett is on page 16 of 456

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Tania is 63% done

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Tania is 40% done

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Shay Avery is 10% done

It's a little confusing and I can't get into the story.

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Shay Avery is 10% done

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Shay Avery is 10% done

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Melissa ♥ Dog/Wolf Lover ♥ Martin is 25% done

Night night ❤

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Dark Winter: The Wicca Circle (Dark Winter, #1)

Melissa ♥ Dog/Wolf Lover ♥ Martin is 18% done

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Melissa ♥ Dog/Wolf Lover ♥ Martin is 10% done

Night night ❤

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Melissa ♥ Dog/Wolf Lover ♥ Martin is 7% done

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Melissa ♥ Dog/Wolf Lover ♥ Martin is 5% done

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Bryan Nowak is 49% done

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Bryan Nowak is 7% done

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M. Cunning is on page 88 of 454

— Jan 21, 2015 05:57PM Add a comment

M. Cunning is on page 53 of 454

The storyline seems good. However, the countless number of grammar and punctuation errors are making it a bit hard for me to enjoy it like I want to.

— Jan 20, 2015 06:55PM Add a comment

Merril Anil is 50% done

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Merril Anil is 50% done

oh man!! this is spooky .... bring it on

— Jan 16, 2015 10:54PM Add a comment

Elizabeth is 50% done

And now it's worse. Get an editor! Okay, the author is pretty good about describing horror scenes, but the story is no more than a vehicle for these scenes. The author contradicts himself, losing the thread of his narrative, and this feels like a bunch of horror-genre vignettes. If you want well-described horror with an actual story, check out The Devouring series. I'm probably not finishing this book.

— Jun 08, 2014 12:19PM Add a comment

Elizabeth is 40% done

It's gotten a bit better, at least now I can figure out what the author is trying to do. However, this book is badly in need of an editor. Pronoun errors and point of view ambiguities abound. Also, another 30% read, another 5 faintings. That's 8 in total for those of you keeping track at home.

— Jun 06, 2014 08:19PM Add a comment

Elizabeth is 14% done

The author seems to be trying to tell about Romilly through rambling tangents told in the style of a tween talking to their friends. Cliches are everywhere. "He had piercing blue eyes and a chin that looked like it was cut from the hardest granite." Seriously? Also, it seems any time someone is freaked out, they faint. Or when the author doesn't want to find their way out if the hole they've dug. 3 times now.

— Jun 06, 2014 08:15AM Add a comment

Elizabeth is 10% done

Really scattered so far. The author seems to be trying to badly foreshadow events or do some sort of flashback/forward thing, but it is haphazard and just leaves the reader confused. I also don't feel like I know or care about the main character. Her life has been in jeopardy once already, but all I felt was that I wanted it to be over so I could figure out where the heck I was. Hope this gets better.

— Jun 05, 2014 10:18PM Add a comment