Status Updates From The Dragonlord's Heir (The ...

Wolf:“I’m no different than you, Logan. You’re doing what you have to do for your father, and I’m doing what I have to do for my friend. Don’t be a hypocrite.”
Logan:“But what I’m doing isn’t wrong.”
Wolf:“Blindly following orders doesn’t make you a saint! It makes you ignorant.”

Emma:“We got lucky. That thing could’ve torn out your neck.”
Logan:“Thanks for putting it in such graphic terms.”

David:“Interesting.”
Logan:“Interesting? That’s it?”
David:“What do you want me to say?”
Logan:“I don’t know. Tell me it doesn’t mean anything. Tell me I’m overreacting.”
David:“You aren’t.”

character development, plot development

notes to self for review so I don't forget: voice! grammar/dialogue! consistency! trials!

Good idea for a story... but I have a few gripes, mostly having to do with the incongruous nature of the 13 year old's inner monologue with how an actual 13 year old would think...

Stage managing and reading books don't often mix...especially when one is stage managing Les Mis!

Because the trials are to test you and you alone.