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Thomaidha Papa
is 30% done
Not good, not good at all. Up until now I'm having trouble with the flat prose, the blandness of the characters, the cheesy dialogues and good God, the typos, structure and freaking tenses. I'm wondering if this even went through proofing let alone editing.
— May 01, 2014 04:37PM
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