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I love the story so far, but Hill can be a bit abstract when writing about very simple stuff. To the point that it’s almost confusing. Is Vic in looking at the bridge? Is she crossing it? Is she thinking about crossing it? Imagining it? Is she on the other side? Sometimes it’s best to just say what’s happening I feel like I’m bouncing around all over the place trying to figure out the simplest actions.

Very clearly Stephen King’s son. Also, this concept is similar to Doctor Sleep?