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Better editing this time around, however the formatting isn't all that great. There are words stuck together and chapters don't start on a new page.
The story has better flow, and the characters speech in dialogue seems much more natural this time around.
I am still noticing timeline issues, though.
— Jun 29, 2014 08:12PM
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The story has better flow, and the characters speech in dialogue seems much more natural this time around.
I am still noticing timeline issues, though.
