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I'm struggling with this one - it feels like it's missing something to pull me forward. I think it's a line level writing issue - I'm not connected to the characters or the stakes, because the world feels pretty cardboard. Like little paper dolls playing out the surface level of a fae romance novel.

bit of a slow start, hoping it picks up soon

This isn’t horrible just not really all that original. I do feel the chemistry between MCs but they also fell so fast. Though on the other side I do love the pacing isn’t so slow and drawn out but it still is almost too fast. Plus the fact the MCs don’t realize their each others mate made them see dumb to me. The other king is the bad guy and doesn’t nothing really to hide it