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is 70% done
Has potential to be excellent
However, structure is disparate / sloppy transitions
Character set but too broad when author is constantly changing perspectives to really build attachment to any of them, yet not so broad to intentionally paint the town as a system or something along those lines. Stuck in a weird goldilocks zone (where goldilocks has neg connotation in this case)
Writing, solid. Atmosphere, 👍
— 1 hour, 55 min ago
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However, structure is disparate / sloppy transitions
Character set but too broad when author is constantly changing perspectives to really build attachment to any of them, yet not so broad to intentionally paint the town as a system or something along those lines. Stuck in a weird goldilocks zone (where goldilocks has neg connotation in this case)
Writing, solid. Atmosphere, 👍
Sam
is on page 50 of 567
clarksburg, west virginia mention on page 4, mind you!!!!! should I turn around before it’s too late???
— 19 hours, 25 min ago
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