Status Updates From Convergence (DRMR #1)
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Josh
is 10% done
There's a story here. And a story that is compelling, and appeals to my nerdy cyberpunk tastes.
However, the writing style needs polish. A lot. Any attempt at writing suspense arrives DOA, since there's so much exposition. It's like Action Scene, cut in 10 minutes of exposition, Action scene resumes, a couple words of dialog, 10 minutes of exposition, then explain how the MC feels about that exposition, etc.
— Dec 29, 2019 04:08PM
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However, the writing style needs polish. A lot. Any attempt at writing suspense arrives DOA, since there's so much exposition. It's like Action Scene, cut in 10 minutes of exposition, Action scene resumes, a couple words of dialog, 10 minutes of exposition, then explain how the MC feels about that exposition, etc.
Brian's Book Blog
is 56% done
Wooo episode 6 is a banger. Lots of action.
— Feb 12, 2019 08:44AM
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Brian's Book Blog
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Finished episode one on serialaudio.com
— Jan 05, 2019 10:23AM
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