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Convergence (DRMR #1)
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Michael Patrick Hicks (Goodreads Author)

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Lars is 25% done

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Sharon is on page 135 of 395

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Sharon is on page 85 of 395

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Sharon is on page 4 of 395

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The Reading Ruru (Kerry) is 8% done

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Caffeinated Covers is 82% done

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Caffeinated Covers is 42% done

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Caffeinated Covers is 30% done

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Ted is 68% done

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Christopher is on page 41 of 394

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Josh is 10% done

There's a story here. And a story that is compelling, and appeals to my nerdy cyberpunk tastes.

However, the writing style needs polish. A lot. Any attempt at writing suspense arrives DOA, since there's so much exposition. It's like Action Scene, cut in 10 minutes of exposition, Action scene resumes, a couple words of dialog, 10 minutes of exposition, then explain how the MC feels about that exposition, etc.

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