Status Updates From Rail Me Knot (Knotty Girls ...

The general story line is good. I really like it an I want to know more but why did they already fuck? I mean they know each other like 2 days and she is injured. The first time she is naked and they help her in the shower and she takes DP all while she is hurt and hat an open back?

It’s quite confusing. The author jumps in different characters. You’re reading out of Gabe’s point of view but in The next moment she writes it like it is in Raelyns pov. And there are a lot of identical sentences. It could have a little more variety.