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Summerfire
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P. 48: "Where are they"
p. 60: "She knows where they are"
I have no idea what's going on. I don't know where the MC stands - does she realize her country is a problem or no? She's a nationalist but also not. She got the apprenticeship but I don't know when? Like just at this moment or was this already planned? Major continuity issues and too many balls in the air with no idea how they connect.
— Jul 18, 2026 09:53AM
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p. 60: "She knows where they are"
I have no idea what's going on. I don't know where the MC stands - does she realize her country is a problem or no? She's a nationalist but also not. She got the apprenticeship but I don't know when? Like just at this moment or was this already planned? Major continuity issues and too many balls in the air with no idea how they connect.
Summerfire
is on page 43 of 414
1) You weren't mauled, you just saw the nurse and she basically said you were bruised. This could be a teenager being hyperbolic but I don't actually know because I don't have a good feel for the character.
2) Pacing is off. Mass fatality event, Mom descending into madness in her bunker (?), gonna hack someone's brain - mad cuz mom doesn't pay attention to me. Huh?
— Jul 15, 2026 07:24PM
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2) Pacing is off. Mass fatality event, Mom descending into madness in her bunker (?), gonna hack someone's brain - mad cuz mom doesn't pay attention to me. Huh?
