Status Updates From Wings of Redemption (Eloria...

Finally some progress, but also no progress. She wakes up with questions, has a lavish breakfast that sounds more like dinner with the high lord but they only exchanged names? And then she get a palace tour and goes to bed. Like... What about talking and maybe dinner? And... I only saw the library.... And all she can think about is how cool it is that someone replenish the drinks in the library... What?

???? So many. Plotholes? And I'm not even at 10%? Her father wants to talk to her but... She got caught in her inner monologue and thinking about how the boy asked to lend her notebook.. And boom - next chapter??? What did her father wanted to talk about??

Joyous occasion, joyous occasion, joyous occasion - yes, I think I got that this celebration, whatever it is, is a joyous occasion... Should I DNF or push through??

The author used the word "adorned" way too much! She used it four times in one Page!! Wtf?