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I guess I don’t understand how she’s half human, half vampire. In every other vampire novel, once you’re turned you’re just not human any more. I guess that’s not the case here but she doesn’t really explain how it works at all

Patiently waiting for something interesting to happen…

I love a bit of realism, especially in dialogue, but, um, well you don’t really, like, need to put every, uh, every single stutter and ‘um’ onto the page, I guess. Yeah.