Status Updates From An Honored Vow (The Halflin...

Finally a whisper of the writing from the first two books. I’m engaged with the story and don’t want to stop. There’s fewer repeated phrases. I know Blair is a good writer, her first two books is proof. Maybe that’s why this books is so disappointing, knowing how GOOD Blair *can* write.

“Jaw cocked to the side” is another overused phrase. Every 15 pages, on average, “disappeared in a flash of light” is used. I’m no editor, or even proofreader. I’m not even picky about genres I read. I could even ignore some plot holes. I really wish Blair could have sprung for a more in depth editor.