Status Updates From The Murder Hypothesis

This was actually pretty good! Maybe could’ve been a bit less theme-driven in the end and Gracie could’ve considered other people’s feeling/investigative ethics a bit more, but the main mystery was complex and had some great twists

Out of all the documents you pick the one least significant to the ending for the big final wrap up?

Eh I don’t like when thrillers focus more on the bigger themes than the actual mystery by the end

…. Uhhhh this is how you’re planning to get sympathy

I love fiction it allows you to remember that villains have the right to be mega malicious and not just broody

Yea it was a bit of a corny turnaround but mannnn I was NEVER suspecting this person

Ooooooo this is getting interesting

I think it’s a bit late to do that

Yea we just got the main stuff resolved and yet there’s so many pages left told ya this was too long

Why did those last few messages feel so forced lol

✨CONSEQUENCES✨

That twist just gave me One of Us is Lying flashbacks ugh

Let’s hope this actually has a decent ending twist

I really don’t think this is the right time

See? You don’t like being pressed about your secrets so don’t get pushy towards other people if they won’t give you theirs!

Or at least be more secretive that you want their secrets!

Here we go again 🙄

Actually now I’m thinking that you are terrible at being subtle

Should’ve just said you wanted some info on the crime, instead of making up fake articles and then ticking everyone off bc you aren’t subtle