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is 47% done
I’m thinking DNF. The spice scenes are so jarring against characters that otherwise are very juvenile. Even if he’s experienced, she’s wildly confident and never nervous. There’s no bumbling or discomfort. Just instant adult film 100% of the time. Which is also a fine trait in a book, but let’s stop trying to make it experienced-virgin.
— 16 hours, 8 min ago
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V. R.
is 35% done
The problem is that she’s supposed to be a novice but she’s giving pornstar in all these situations. There’s no fumbling. All confidence.
— 19 hours, 19 min ago
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