Status Updates From Only a Portal Away (The Cod...

Bro I’m sure there are other creatures in the world besides “frogs croaking” and “crickets chirping”

Hold up. Author, you already said this, you just repeated yourself. Only you said it differently 😶

Ya know my thoughts while reading this is… are they even showering? There’s no indication of like mundane things? They sleep, they eat, they drive, but they don’t shower? Bruh

If the author says “unhelpfully” one more time, im gonna lose it 😭

I don’t want to dnf this… it started ok and now it feels like it’s plummeting 😣

Never have I laughed and cringed at the same time 🤣

Ahahaha the fact that this is every girls dream!!! Bruhhhhh

Ok this is off to a bad start… the story is ok-ish, the writing. Ohoho the writing isn’t too good.

I already hate the main character.

Soooo much telling and soooo much useless added information.

Oof, this needed an editor. Very badly. Sentences are painfully repetitive and there’s so much random fluff in the wordiness. And that’s without even getting into the awkwardness of reneging on show statements with tell statements of the exact opposite.

Horrible writing but a great story. Ugh.