Status Updates From An Arrow to the Heart (Aleh...

This is a cute story so far but really could have used more editing. Feels like a first draft. In addition to grammar/spelling issues, there are inconsistencies like the color of a dress or type of drink changing within a page or two. I also find the way the author is trying to set up a mystery of whoever Sylas is, is frustrating to read.

”The last thing he could recall before the darkness took over him was a gorgeous pair of big tits hovering over his face” 😃 i think that’s a dnf for me

Y’all I’m not sure if I’m the problem or if it’s the books lately 😭 not sure how I’m feeling