Status Updates From Lost in the Garden

Alright, NOW I see the significant pacing issues. It's so interesting but drags terribly between interesting parts.

I really don't understand the point of Antonia's character, she just whines and pines, if she were cut completely it wouldn't hurt the narrative (I think it would improve it). Besides that, still a good time, love the writing.

This went from zero to full weird very quickly, I'm enjoying it so far.