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Too slow

My own writing style & reading preference has me struggling with this. Short sentences give such a choppy feel that it makes it difficult to engage with the read. Again, probably because I like my reads (& my own books) to flow from one sentence to another. I know the short sentence choppiness is a style, yet it hurts my brain. Even so, this is honestly well written, and I really like the story so far!