Status Updates From Breaking the Girl

The amount of typos and weird grammar continually take me out of the story. Frustrating to say the least.
Gouging instead of gaging?
There needs to be some kind of break or recognition of time lapses, that’s a bit confusing. Also, continuity of positions of their bodies make no sense in some of the spice scenes.
She’s against a window, then the next sentence she’s against the wall? Now it’s a glass wall?

Está súper loco este wey que me da risa y asusta, parece que tiene esquizofrenia pero capaz la hija si esta loca, who knows