Status Updates From The Weaver (The Vrix, #1)

As much as I like this, I do think that Rekosh’s conflict with his dad wasn’t done as efficiently as it could’ve been. Yeah, it’s discussed, but not a lot of time is dedicated to it, while the smut and the romance are given time. It just felt a little rushed and haphazard at points

Run-on

ELLLLLLLAAAAAAAAAAAAA IM IN PAIN

“”He sounds like Ketahn,” Telok said from behind.
“What?” Ketahn and Rekosh demanded simultaneously.”
ROLLING-

Typo

Oh ok so it was just a bone shrine. The bones weren’t animated. I was about to say

Run-on

The resurrection trope? Really? Yeah it’s cool, but it’s also still kinda lame. Like Zurvashi again? We couldn’t find something or someone else?

Typo

Y’all-

To be loved is to be seen

….shutthefckup

him biting his claws off is insane and I had a feeling it would happen omf this is wild

MAYDAY BITCHES MAYDAY
WE CANT BE DOING THIS MAN

“”My wife.””
HIT ME WITH A CAR PLEASE

I’m trying to decide if it feels a little too easy, if I think the relationship has progressed too fast for the sake of getting them to be mates already from a writing standpoint. Bc I do feel like they like each other, but I’m still waiting for her reservations about pregnancy/mates to catch up with Ahmya

“”And…the company is good.””
STOP IM SOFT

We are so back y’all oml

ok no this whole scene has crazy sexual tension oml

Ahmya better fck it up tbh

yoooooo this is crazyyyyy the tensION

HE'S GONNA BRAID HER HAIR-?
IM SICK

"he huffed. "I am strong.""
ROLLING
I love Rekosh

While I'm loving this...are every single one of them gonna end up pregnant? Is it gonna be an Ice Planet Barbarians thing where there are no child-free women?

NOT THE BEADING-
Get this guy on Say Yes to the Dress