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Pauline
is 32% done
Made it to 32% and that’s already 31% too far. No plot, no tension, no character development, and somehow still unnecessarily long. I’m officially tapping out of this awful book.
— Oct 29, 2025 12:25PM
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anonymous
is 50% done
I’ve been trying so hard to stick with this but the writing is soooooo bad. Clunky, awkward sentence structure, and the DIALOGUE makes me want to do something unhinged. It’s so unnatural and forced. NO ONE talks like these characters it’s crazy uncomfortable. The characters are inconsistent in their personalities and make some seriously out of pocket decisions that make no sense and the PLOT HOLES are wild.
— Oct 20, 2025 09:04PM
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