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Why must Mary go and frustrate me like that. She has such an obnoxious sense of superiority that nags me. I understand where she’s coming from being the center of so much jesting but my god can she really make herself look like a douche. I hope she grows as a character in the book.
ADDITIONALLY I HOPE SHE GIVES UP THIS THING ABOUT HER COUSIN ASAP!!!!! I know it’s of the time but oh my goooooood stop!

So far decent for fan fiction. It really is too long but my love for P&P is carrying me through. IMHO Mr. Collins is pushed too far out of the original character but most of the others are pretty faithful.