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I think I'll give this one more chapter or so and see how I feel. This book is very "here damn" it gives me all the information with no emotion, the fun plot point I picked up the book for happened almost immediately. I feel like this is definitely a debut novel, and needed harsher editing, and maybe a writers class if it was going to be an adult fiction novel bc it's written very early YA. And not the good kind.