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Branomander YT
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Re-reading for a review. So far, a whole lot of bumbling around. And flashbacks. And terrible characterization. And horrible dialogue. And pointless hallucinations and dream sequences. And it sucks because I know where this is all going - NOWHERE!
I just wish Luke would have gotten The Gets. That way he would have amnesia and we wouldn't have to endure the flashbacks, and the resultant pacing problems.
— Jan 25, 2026 09:17PM
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I just wish Luke would have gotten The Gets. That way he would have amnesia and we wouldn't have to endure the flashbacks, and the resultant pacing problems.





















