Status Updates From The Cowboy and the Stray (W...

okay so she steals a vehicle and drives for days and then he just magically finds her in the next page? WHERE ARE THE FUCKIN DETAILS

i’m confused how we went from having sex in the loft to shooting a gun at a fence post? like how did we get here and where is the details babe

no i fear i missed something because there is simply no way our “never trust a man especially one that’s nice to you” girl just suddenly stopped being afraid and kissed this giant cowboy only because they were looking at the stars. like ? where is the longing ? aside gazing upon his shirtless form once there hasn’t even been mention of want so i HAD to have missed something right ?

no because why was the earlier accidental shift in POV in the middle of a chapter to say the fmc cooked fish for her ex, and then we proceed to her burning everything she’s ever tried to cook and that she doesn’t even know how to make a grilled cheese???? make it make sense

i was thinking the writing of this seemed kind of ill thought out/first novel/unedited vibes and the fact that the perspective switches in the middle of a chapter for a paragraph further cements that. like how do you just accidentally switch perspectives for an entire paragraph and not notice during edits ?????

two favorite genres: cowboys and wolves!