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Vaishnavi Dheepson
is finished
I honestly don't have anything to say
I don't wanna think
I feel so bad for low-key hating on this queer Desi novel but like
Ugghhh
Maybe it was a situation of 'ok book, wrong time' idk
Stuff that was definitely cool was, obviously the Desi setting, but also the fact that the main character doesn't instantly know how to use her powers and so continues to screw up
Idk all in all 3.7 tbh
— Feb 17, 2025 09:57AM
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I don't wanna think
I feel so bad for low-key hating on this queer Desi novel but like
Ugghhh
Maybe it was a situation of 'ok book, wrong time' idk
Stuff that was definitely cool was, obviously the Desi setting, but also the fact that the main character doesn't instantly know how to use her powers and so continues to screw up
Idk all in all 3.7 tbh
Vaishnavi Dheepson
is 70% done
The wasted potential istg
Why is her brother tagging along? So their mother doesn't like idk find out he helps her escape. What is the relevance here
And SHE HAD SOMEONE CHASING HER AND YOU BRING THAT UP NOW ONLY FOR HIM TO BE LIKE "OUHH I MEAN I SUPPOSE FATHER WAS WRONG AND LYING ALL THIS TIME AND YOU DESERVE TO SAVE UR GF"
Like
?
Idk wouldn't a chase increase urgency and stakes?
The "ambush" was barely an ambush
— Feb 17, 2025 08:13AM
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Why is her brother tagging along? So their mother doesn't like idk find out he helps her escape. What is the relevance here
And SHE HAD SOMEONE CHASING HER AND YOU BRING THAT UP NOW ONLY FOR HIM TO BE LIKE "OUHH I MEAN I SUPPOSE FATHER WAS WRONG AND LYING ALL THIS TIME AND YOU DESERVE TO SAVE UR GF"
Like
?
Idk wouldn't a chase increase urgency and stakes?
The "ambush" was barely an ambush
