Status Updates From Merciful Lies (Jersey Bad B...

Something that is hard for me to get through is the way the sentence structures are mainly with Anna. It’s almost like the author put a bunch of short sentences down to try and convey everything they wanted to say but there is no flow between them. Just very random thoughts placed together to try and make sense of what they wanted to say. I’m waiting to see if it gets better the further I get.

I like how quick it is. I do like the spicy scenes/thoughts… very sexy 🥵

I’m obviously going into this knowing it’s smut and I’m not sure how much plot there’s going to be… BUT! I do want to say I don’t like that the story isn’t in the same tense. Sometimes it’s past and sometimes it’s present, all in the same sentence/paragraph. Also, there are inconsistent character details. Anna says she’s 31 and then the next chapter, Nico says she’s 32. Which one is it?!