Status Updates From Vicious (Sinners of Saint #1)

a masculine spice of boy-man, sweet sweat, sour hormones, and the faint trace of clean laundry, one of my mama’s many chores.


Sour hormones?????? Did he just jack off is that what she's referring to? What are you even saying? This is only the beginning of the book, mind you.

The young man took a step closer, and I took a step back. His eyes were dead, but his lips were red, full, and very much alive. This guy is going to break my heart if I let him


What the fuck is this? These are the thoughts of a 18 year old teenage girl who witnessed a so called scary conversation. We all think about lips and the wood color of the library when we're scared.

Dialogues are already cringe haha. "Fuck you you want to fuck your sister, too I bet. I'm going to kill you and your cunt." He sounded amused and vicious and angry and edgy. Oh... The readers are going to swoon.

" I say a boy, but there was nothing boyish about."

How do you say boyish then?

“Because,” she said, pinning me with a stare that stabbed at my conscience, “Rosie’s sick, and his parents are out of town. You’re his age. He’ll listen to you


Yeah duh. Don't we all give money to people just because we listen to them when we're the same age?

I don't know what to think yet lol, I don't hate Vicious, but I don't like him either. And I don't know if I like Emilia either lol, but L. J. Shen writes so easily.I can just keep reading and honestly, I'm interested in what's going to happen and how it happens.