Status Updates From Lessons in Forever

review to come

There are definitely some hot scenes! I'm curious to see how things will play out between Rachel and Mitch. I do have to say, though, these errors are becoming a bit of a distraction. I had to back track to figure out the whole Seth Paulson/Seth Simpson mistake.

This has been entertaining so far. A good proofing is needed, though. The errors aren't enough of a distraction to keep from following the story but they are definitely noticeable and becoming much more frequent.

Not even out of the prologue and I love the main character already!

How much damage could a jab with a chopstick do? Rachel wondered as she twirled the stick through her fingers like a baton. Probably not enough.

Her wonderings while listening to her blind date drone on!,