Status Updates From POM: Portals of Middle-Vision

I just finished the 5th chapter, but I’m going to stop here. I’m not finding this book to be my cup of tea. I think what I’m not fond of is how dutiful the characters are like they have almost no free will. The world building is intriguing with the different levels which are separated by portals and tunnels. The luminescents are humans who are in their after life which is cool how they are processed.