Status Updates From Deadly Cravings (Crimson Co...

"To everyone wanting to get fanged-banged by multiple deliciously sinful vamps"

Goshhhh this is awful.

This is so so so so so very bad and yet it has a 4.3. I want to dnf, but if I get 1/3 the way in I always feel like I've gone too far to quit..... but not far enough to know if I really should quit.

Dnf

30% in and still lack the character and plot development

I’m outta here

Not sure I can continue. I think I am over insta lust and mary sue fmc’s. Going to drop it for a bit and try again later. See my highlighted quotes for my opinions thus far. It is problematic bc there is just so much telling, Inner dialogue & already a few choppy scene changes where I couldn’t figure out wtf was going on. This author has a lot of potential. Needs better alpha/beta readers.

There’s a whole lot of telling in this book. Ugh.