Status Updates From Shattered Soul

seth finally goes home from trips house where he has been hiding from calvins abuse.

its getting more intence with the beatings and the drugs along with tthe parties

seth was in the dope mans house and did meth so they didnt think he was an undercover cop

ali and seth went to smoke weed under a bridge they both talked about their home life. alis father is a cop and mother is a writer. after calvin took seth to the dope mans house to exchange drugs and money

seth is selling the rest of his drugs and he goes home with ali

seth got a ride home from ali the girl he is crazy about. he explained to her that his mom is a drunk and he cannot let ali in. His brother came home and asked seth to sell drugs at his school for him to make enough money to report to the dope man

I think my story does have an allegory. I believe that the story is trying to state don't be or do something you don't want to become or others to become. I think this because in the story Seth is a drugie but was starting to change for his sweet oure girlfriend. Now the tables have turned and Serh is starting to be the good pure one and his used to be sweet girl friend has now become hooked.

I think my story does have an allegory. I believe that the story is trying to state don't be or do something you don't want to become or others to become. I think this because in the story Seth is a drugie but was starting to change for his sweet oure girlfriend. Now the tables have turned and Serh is starting to be the good pure one and his used to be sweet girl friend has now become hooked.

So far what has happened is that Seth mediocre child. He has to grow up with alcohol and drugs all around him. His brothers a dealer and his moms a alcohol addict. Every day Seth always has to be responsible for himself. No on looks out for him besides himslef. He's life is sad,dull, and boring. But one day Seth sees a beautiful girl. She changes him. She makes him not want to drugs, she makes him want to be better.

I believe I got this as a freebie on my e-reader. I am not impressed and I keep putting it down. I am not sure if I will finish it, It's just not grabbing my attention. I think it's the writing...:-( I'll try once more soon and then if not winning me over, I'll chuck it.