Status Updates From Roadside Midnight

on pg90, there is an error, where alex is mentioned twice.

They just found booze in an abandoned barn in the kolkohz, Lev finds the shipping notice, he is surprised by who ordered it, but doesnt say who ordered it.

I am trying again, and will succeed this time, hopefully, before I go camping. SO far, quite a bit of the dialogue is funny, especially one interaction where a character goes, 'I'd kill for some sashlik', and his friend asked who he would kill for some sashlik. My main critique at the moment is its a bit difficult for me to visualise the characters, specifically Alex and Lev.

This book was intriguing from the moment I opened it and saw that the contents page was at the back of the book rather than at the beginning. The first chapter was a bit hard for my tired brain to understand. It does help to know how boris speaks in his videos, some of the wording is a bit confusing otherwise, although maybe that is intentional due to a potential otherworldly nature the book will have.