Status Updates From Far From Neverland

I had no choice but to give up on making sense of the characters. I'm just trying to enjoy smut which is good but would still be better if I could somehow relate with the MCs.
I'm kinda ready for it to be over...

OOC doesn't even describe this cake baking + apology scene, absolutely ridiculous
Shower scene was fun, could have been more detailed imo

I wanted to give dark romance a try. Without being a big fan of the Peter Pan story I always saw the potential of a good enemies to lover with Hook and Peter.

55% in, Hook seems very OOC from the depiction we had in the 1st chapters. He went from dark and cruel to possessive puppy. I feel like we are missing the tension and yearning and maybe even the rawness.

The switch from forget to remember seems a bit easy...

j’suis à fond mais y’a un drama sur tiktok donc je fais une pause tqt

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