Status Updates From When They Burned the Butterfly

I would like this a lot better if it wasn’t YA because whyyy are they 15 fucking years old it makes no sense lmao

Another editing error. Unfinished clause within a sentence. I'm starting to wonder if this was edited by chatgpt. There's nothing on this book that makes it look like an arc. I think this is the actual published version

Continuity error! How can she never have heard a gunshot in real life when she shot a pistol like 2 chapters ago? 🤔 Then one chapter later it reminds us of her shooting the pistol. So like... Wtf. Editor: this was your job to catch.

Also I think they flipped Adeline and Tian's names in a scene.

Editor. Once again. This is your job

This might actually be hard mode for high fashion