Status Updates From Eat, Slay, Love

I’m going to finish this book but like where was the editor? I’ve counted 2 times that proper nouns weren’t capitalized and at least one sentence that is so bizarrely structured I’m still not sure what it was trying to say

I‘m not a fan of the structure.. I feel like the informations are given in a way that simply doesn‘t fit. One chapter we find out that Lilah was assaulted, she thinks about for two minutes and suddenly in the next chapter we find out that a hitman killed her dad.

if what cohen was going for with lilah's characterization was "most naive and annoying woman on earth" she's killing it