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Tiffany
is 78% done
Storyline seems to finally be picking up some
— Sep 12, 2026 08:17AM
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Tiffany
is 67% done
Listening to Astra is like hearing that annoying, chatty Cathy who won’t stop talking
— Sep 11, 2026 08:41PM
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Deanna
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Unedited "first draft" set up. It feels like this wasn't given a "3rd draft" re-write to establish the beginning and relationship better but I DO like it so far. This type of narrative isn't my cup of tea but it's still good writing so far. Just a bit jumping the gun, but really good so far.
— Sep 04, 2026 12:42PM
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Tiffany
is 24% done
After the first 11% it was tempting to DNF. The writing from the 1st person POV sounds very juvenile, especially with the word choices that she uses. The FMC refers to herself in really degrading terms, such as “slut” & she might’ve referred to herself as despicable/disgusting. They also refer to the male parts as “man thingy “. The FMC talks to herself a lot & asks herself a ton of rhetorical questions.
— Sep 01, 2026 10:17AM
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